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    Ch1 : The Madwomen


    [Frankenstein in Baghdad : A Novel [Ahmed Saadawi
    Chapter One : The Madwomen




    (1)
    THE EXPLOSION TOOK place two minutes after Elishva, the old
    .woman known as Umm Daniel, or Daniel’s mother, boarded the bus
    Everyone on the bus turned around to see what had happened. They
    watched in shock as a ball of smoke rose, dark and black, beyond the
    .crowds, from the car park near Tayaran Square in the center of Baghdad
    Young people raced to the scene of the explosion, and cars collided into
    : each other or into the median. The drivers were frightened and confused
    they were assaulted by the sound of car horns and of people screaming
    .and shouting

    Elishva’s neighbors in Lane 7 said later that she had left the Bataween
    district to pray in the Church of Saint Odisho, near the University of
    Technology, as she did every Sunday, and that’s why the explosion
    ,happened—some of the locals believed that, with her spiritual powers
    .Elishva prevented bad things from happening when she was among them
    Sitting on the bus, minding her own business, as if she were deaf or
    not even there, Elishva didn’t hear the massive explosion about two
    ,hundred yards behind her. Her frail body was curled up by the window
    and she looked out without seeing anything, thinking about the bitter
    taste in her mouth and the sense of gloom that she had been unable to
    .shake off for the past few days

    .The bitter taste might disappear after she took Holy Communion
    Hearing the voices of her daughters and their children on the phone, she
    would have a little respite from her melancholy, and the light would shine
    again in her cloudy eyes. Father Josiah would usually wait for his cell
    phone to ring and then tell Elishva that Matilda was on the line, or if

    Matilda didn’t call on time, Elishva might wait another hour and then ask
    the priest to call Matilda. This had been repeated every Sunday for at
    least two years. Before that, Elishva’s daughters had called irregularly on
    ,the land line at church. But then when the Americans invaded Baghdad
    their missiles destroyed the telephone exchange, and the phones were cut
    off for many months. Death stalked the city like the plague, and Elishva’s
    .daughters felt the need to check every week that the old woman was okay
    At first, after a few difficult months, they spoke on the Thuraya satellite
    phone that a Japanese charity had given to the young Assyrian priest at
    the church. When the wireless networks were introduced, Father Josiah
    .bought a cell phone, and Elishva spoke to her daughters on that
    Members of the congregation would stand in line after Mass to hear the
    voices of their sons and daughters dispersed around the world. Often
    people from the surrounding Karaj al-Amana neighborhood—Christians
    of other denominations and Muslims too—would come to the church to
    make free calls to their relatives abroad. As cell phones spread, the
    demand for Father Josiah’s phone declined, but Elishva was content to
    .maintain the ritual of her Sunday phone call from church

    With her veined and wrinkled hand, Elishva would put the Nokia
    phone to her ear. Upon hearing her daughters’ voices, the darkness would
    lift and she would feel at peace. If she had gone straight back to Tayaran
    Square, she would have found that everything was calm, just as she had
    left it in the morning. The sidewalks would be clean and the cars that had
    caught fire would have been towed away. The dead would have been
    .taken to the forensics department and the injured to the Kindi Hospital
    There would be some shattered glass here and there, a pole blackened
    with smoke, and a hole in the asphalt, though she wouldn’t have been
    .able to make out how big it was because of her blurred vision

    When the Mass was over she lingered for an extra hour. She sat down
    in the hall adjacent to the church, and after the women had set out on
    tables the food they brought with them, she went ahead and ate with
    everyone, just to have something to do. Father Josiah made a desperate
    last attempt to call Matilda, but her phone was out of service. Matilda had
    probably lost her phone, or it had been stolen from her on the street or at
    some market in Melbourne, where she lived. Maybe she had forgotten to
    write down Father Josiah’s number or had some other excuse. The priest
    couldn’t make sense of it but kept trying to console Elishva, and when

    everyone started leaving, the deacon, Nader Shamouni, offered Elishva a
    ride home in his old Volga. This was the second week without a phone
    call. Elishva didn’t actually need to hear her daughters’ voices. Maybe it
    was just habit or something more important: that with her daughters she
    could talk about Daniel. Nobody really listened to her when she spoke
    about the son she had lost twenty years ago, except for her daughters and
    Saint George the Martyr, whose soul she often prayed for and whom she
    saw as her patron saint. You might add her old cat, Nabu, whose hair was
    falling out and who slept most of the time. Even the women at church
    grew distant when she began to talk about her son—because she just said
    the same things over and over. It was the same with the old women who
    were her neighbors. Some of them couldn’t remember what Daniel looked
    like. Besides, he was just one of many who’d died over the years. Elishva
    was gradually losing people who had once supported her strange
    conviction that her son was still alive, even though he had a grave with an
    .empty coffin in the cemetery of the Assyrian Church of the East

    Elishva no longer shared with anyone her belief that Daniel was still
    alive. She just waited to hear the voice of Matilda or Hilda because they
    would put up with her, however strange this idea of hers. The two
    daughters knew their mother clung to the memory of her late son in order
    .to go on living. There was no harm in humoring her

    Nader Shamouni, the deacon, dropped off Elishva in Lane 7 in
    Bataween, just a few steps from her door. The street was quiet. The
    slaughter had ended several hours ago, but the destruction was still
    .clearly visible. It might have been the neighborhood’s biggest explosion
    The old deacon was depressed; he didn’t say a word to Elishva as he
    parked his car next to an electricity pole. There was blood and hair on the
    pole, mere inches from his nose and his thick white mustache. He felt a
    .tremor of fear

    Elishva got out of the deacon’s car and waved good-bye. Walking down
    the street, she could hear her unhurried footsteps on the gravel. She was
    preparing an answer for when she opened the door and Nabu looked up
    ”​?as if to ask, “So? What happened

    More important, she was preparing to scold Saint George. The
    previous night he had promised that she would either receive some good
    news or her mind would be set at rest and her ordeal would come to an
    .end


    (2)
    Elishva’s neighbor Umm Salim believed strongly, unlike many
    others, that Elishva had special powers and that God’s hand was on her
    shoulder wherever she was. She could cite numerous incidents as
    evidence. Although sometimes she might criticize or think ill of the old
    woman, she quickly went back to respecting and honoring her. When
    Elishva came to visit and they sat with some of their neighbors in the
    shade in Umm Salim’s old courtyard, Umm Salim spread out for her a
    woven mat, placed cushions to the right and left of her, and poured her
    .tea

    Sometimes she might exaggerate and say openly in Elishva’s presence
    —that if it weren’t for those inhabitants who had baraka—spiritual power
    the neighborhood would be doomed and swallowed up by the earth on
    God’s orders. But this belief of Umm Salim’s was really like the smoke she
    blew from her shisha pipe during those afternoon chats: it came out in
    ,billows, then coiled into sinuous white clouds that vanished into the air
    .never to travel outside the courtyard

    ,Many thought of Elishva as just a demented old woman with amnesia
    the proof being that she couldn’t remember the names of men—even
    those she had known for half a century. Sometimes she looked at them in
    a daze, as though they had sprung up in the neighborhood out of
    .nowhere

    Umm Salim and some of the other kindhearted neighbors were
    distraught when Elishva started to tell bizarre stories about things that
    .had happened to her—stories that no reasonable person would believe
    Others scoffed, saying that Umm Salim and the other women were just
    sad that one of their number had crossed over to the dark and desolate
    shore beyond, meaning the group as a whole was headed in the same
    .direction


    (3)
    Two people were sure Elishva didn’t have special powers or
    ,anything and was just a crazy old woman. The first was Faraj the realtor
    owner of the Rasoul realty office on the main commercial street in
    Bataween. The second was Hadi the junk dealer, who lived in a makeshift
    .dwelling attached to Elishva’s house

    Over the past few years Faraj had tried repeatedly to persuade Elishva
    .to sell her old house, but Elishva just flatly refused, without explanation
    Faraj couldn’t understand why an old woman like her would want to live
    alone in a seven-room house with only a cat. Why, he wondered, didn’t
    she sell it and move to a smaller house with more air and light, and use
    ? the extra money to live the rest of her life in comfort

    Faraj never got a good answer. As for Hadi, her neighbor, he was a
    scruffy, unfriendly man in his fifties who always smelled of alcohol. He
    had asked Elishva to sell him the antiques that filled her house: two large
    wall clocks, teak tables of various sizes, carpets and furnishings, and
    plaster and ivory statues of the Virgin Mary and the Infant Jesus. There
    were more than twenty of these statues, spread around the house, as well
    .as many other things that Hadi hadn’t had time to inspect

    Of these antiques, some of which dated back to the 1940s, Hadi had
    asked Elishva, “Why don’t you sell them, save yourself the trouble of
    dusting?” his eyes popping out of his head at the sight of them all. But the
    old woman just walked him to the front door and sent him out into the
    street, closing the door behind him. That was the only time Hadi had seen
    the inside of her house, and the impression it left him with was of a
    .strange museum

    The two men didn’t abandon their efforts, but because the junk dealer
    usually wasn’t presentable, Elishva’s neighbors were not sympathetic to
    him. Faraj the realtor tried several times to encourage Elishva’s neighbors
    to win her over to his proposal; some even accused Veronica Munib, the
    Armenian neighbor, of taking a bribe from Faraj to persuade Elishva to
    ,move in with Umm Salim and her husband. Faraj never lost hope. Hadi
    on the other hand, constantly pestered Elishva until he eventually lost
    interest and just threw hostile glances her way whenever she passed him
    .on the street

    Elishva not only rejected the offers from these two men, she also
    reserved a special hatred for them, consigning them to everlasting hell. In
    their faces she saw two greedy people with tainted souls, like cheap
    .carpets with permanent ink stains

    Abu Zaidoun the barber could be added to the list of people Elishva
    hated and cursed. Elishva had lost Daniel because of him: he was the
    Baathist who had taken her son by the collar and dragged him off into the
    .unknown. But Abu Zaidoun had been out of sight for many years

    Elishva no longer ran into him, and no one talked about him in front of her. Since
    leaving the Baath Party, he had been preoccupied with his many ailments
    . and had no time for anything that happened in the neighborhood


    (4)
    Faraj was at home when the massive explosion went off in
    ,Tayaran Square. Three hours later, at about ten o’clock in the morning
    .he opened his realty office and noticed cracks in the large front window
    He cursed his bad luck, though he had noticed the shattered windows of
    many other shops in the area. In fact, he could see Abu Anmar, owner of
    ,the Orouba Hotel across the street, standing bewildered on the sidewalk
    in his dishdasha, amid shards of glass from his old hotel’s upper
    .windows

    Faraj could see that Abu Anmar was shocked, but he didn’t care: he
    had no great affection for him. They were polar opposites, even
    undeclared rivals. Abu Anmar, like many of the hotel owners in
    Bataween, made his living off workers and students and people who came
    to Baghdad from the provinces to visit hospitals or clinics or to go
    shopping. Over the past decade, with the departure of many of the
    Egyptian and Sudanese migrant workers, hotels had become dependent
    on a few customers who lived in them almost permanently—drivers on
    long-distance bus routes, students who didn’t like the college dorms, and
    people who worked in the restaurants in Bab al-Sharqi and Saadoun
    Street, in the factories that made shoes and other things, and in the Harj
    flea market. But most of these people disappeared after April 2003, and
    now many of the hotels were nearly empty. To make matters worse, Faraj
    had appeared on the scene, trying to win over customers who might
    otherwise have gone to Abu Anmar’s hotel or one of the others in the
    .area

    Faraj had taken advantage of the chaos and lawlessness in the city to
    get his hands on several houses of unknown ownership. He turned these
    into cheap boardinghouses, renting the rooms to workers from the
    provinces or to families displaced from nearby areas for sectarian reasons
    or because of old vendettas that had come back into effect with the fall of
    .the regime

    Abu Anmar could only grumble and complain. He had moved to
    Baghdad from the south in the 1970s and had no relatives or friends in
    the capital to help him. In the past he had relied on the power of the
    ,regime. Faraj, on the other hand, had many relatives and acquaintances
    and when the regime fell, they were the means by which he imposed
    authority, winning everyone’s respect and legalizing his appropriation of
    the abandoned houses, even though everyone knew he didn’t have the
    papers to prove he owned them or had ever rented them from the
    .government

    Faraj could use his growing power against Elishva. He had seen her
    house from the inside only twice but had fallen in love with it
    immediately. It had probably been built by Jews, since it was in the style
    favored by the Iraqi Jews: an inner courtyard surrounded by several
    rooms on two floors, with a basement under one of the rooms that
    opened onto the street. There were fluted wooden columns supporting
    ,the arcade on the upper floor. With the metal railings, inlaid with wood
    they created a unique aesthetic effect. The house also had double-leaf
    wooden doors with metal bolts and locks, and wooden windows
    reinforced with metal bars and glazed with stained glass. The courtyard
    was paved with fine brickwork and the rooms with small black and white
    tiles like a chessboard. The courtyard was open to the sky and had once
    ,been covered with a white cloth that was removed during the summer
    ,but the cloth was no longer there. The house was not as it once had been
    but it was sturdy and had suffered little water damage, unlike similar
    houses on the street. The basement had been filled in at some point, but
    that didn’t matter. The main drawback for Faraj was that one of the
    rooms on the upper floor had completely collapsed, with many of the
    bricks having fallen beyond the wall shared with the house next door; the
    total ruin inhabited by Hadi the junk dealer. The bathroom on the upper
    floor was also in ruins. Faraj would need to spend some money on repairs
    .and renovations, but it would be worth it

    Faraj thought it would take only half an hour to evict a defenseless old
    Christian woman, but a voice in his head warned him that he risked
    breaking the law and offending people, so it might be better to first gauge
    people’s feelings about the old woman. The best thing would be to wait
    ,till she died, and then no one but he would dare to take over the house
    since everyone knew how attached he was to it and acknowledged him as
    .its future owner, however long Elishva lived
    “Look on the bright side,” Faraj shouted to Abu Anmar, who was
    wringing his hands in dismay at the damage to his property. Abu Anmar
    raised his arms to the heavens in solidarity with Faraj’s optimism, or
    maybe he was saying “May God take you” to the greedy realtor whom fate
    .had taunted him with all day long


    (5)
    Elishva shoved her cat off the sofa and brushed away the loose cat
    hairs. She couldn’t actually see any hairs, but she knew from stroking the
    cat that its hair was falling out all over the place. She could overlook the
    hair unless it was in her special spot on the sofa facing the large picture of
    Saint George the Martyr that hung between smaller gray pictures of her
    son and her husband, framed in carved wood. There were two other
    pictures of the same size, one of the Last Supper and the other of Christ
    being taken down from the cross, and three miniatures copied from
    medieval icons, drawn in thick ink and faded colors, depicting various
    saints, some of whose names she didn’t know because it was her husband
    who had put them up many years ago. They were still as they were
    originally hung, some in the parlor, some in her bedroom, some in
    Daniel’s room, which was closed, and some in the other abandoned
    .rooms

    Almost every evening she sat there to resume her sterile conversation
    with the saint with the angelic face. The saint wasn’t in ecclesiastical
    dress: he was wearing thick, shiny plates of armor that covered his body
    and a plumed helmet, with his wavy blond hair peeking out from under
    the helmet. He was holding a long pointed lance and sitting on a
    muscular white horse that had reared up to avoid the jaws of a hideous
    dragon encroaching from the corner of the picture, intent on swallowing
    .the horse, the saint, and all his military accoutrements
    Elishva ignored the extravagant details. She put on the thick glasses
    that hung from a cord around her neck and looked at the calm, angelic
    face that betrayed no emotion. He wasn’t angry or desperate or dreamy or
    .happy. He was just doing his job out of devotion to God

    Elishva found no comfort in abstract speculation. She treated her
    patron saint as one of her relatives, a member of a family that had been
    torn apart and dispersed. He was the only person she had left, apart from
    Nabu, the cat, and the specter of her son, Daniel, who was bound to
    return one day. To others she lived alone, but she believed she lived with
    three beings, or three ghosts, with so much power and presence that she
    .didn’t feel lonely

    She was angry because her patron saint hadn’t fulfilled any of the
    three promises she had extracted from him after countless nights of
    pleading, begging, and weeping. She didn’t have much time left on this
    earth, and she wanted a sign from the Lord about Daniel—whether he
    .was alive and would return or where his real grave or his remains were
    She wanted to challenge her patron saint on the promises he had given
    her, but she waited for night to fall because during the day the picture
    was just a picture, inanimate and completely still, but at night a portal
    ,opened between her world and the other world, and the Lord came down
    embodied in the image of the saint, to talk through him to Elishva, the
    poor sheep who had been abandoned by the rest of the flock and had
    .almost fallen into the abyss of faithless perdition

    That night, by the light of the oil lamp, Elishva could see the ripples in
    the old picture behind the murky glass, but she could see also the saint’s
    eyes and his soft, handsome face. Nabu meowed irritably as he left the
    room. The saint’s long arm was still holding the lance, but now his eyes
    were on Elishva. “You’re too impatient, Elishva,” he said. “I told you the
    Lord will bring you peace of mind or put an end to your torment, or you
    will hear news that will bring you joy. But no one can make the Lord act
    ”.at a certain time

    Elishva argued with the saint for half an hour until his beautiful face
    reverted to its normal state, his dreamy gaze stiff and immobile, a sign
    that he had grown tired of this sterile discussion. Before going to bed, she
    said her usual prayers in front of the large wooden cross in her bedroom
    .and checked that Nabu was asleep in the corner on a small tiger-skin rug
    The next day, after having breakfast and washing the dishes, she was
    surprised to hear the annoying roar of American Apache helicopters
    flying overhead. She saw her son, Daniel, or imagined she did. There was
    Danny, as she had always called him when he was young—at last her

    patron saint’s prophecy had come true. She called him, and he came over
    ”.to her. “Come, my son. Come, Danny

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    Thanks Ahmed so much

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    Thanks Ahmed so much
    welcome

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