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[سامح]

William Carlos Williams, 1883 - 1963

so much depends
upon
a red wheel
barrow
glazed with rain
water
beside the white
chickens

[J.L]

Is it a poem ?
I read it 5 times
I felt a missing hope in somewhere inside it
and then there's a happiness shines with the white color
:)

[سامح]

Is it a poem ?
I read it 5 times
I felt a missing hope in somewhere inside it
and then there's a happiness shines with the white color
:)

It is a free verse poem , I liked it , I just heard it in a movie narrated by a character , she also added some line to the poem , I will write it down here later on, but William has nothing to do with this lol
shining always

[J.L]

I'm totally shocked cause I didn't expect it's a poem
I thought it's a picture with secret
Hhh

I can write one like it and will call it poem Why not?


.. no we should say truth
.. when it read for the first time you feel nothing just confused
but when I read it again and again I feel the difference and this red weel refer to some thing scary and the w chicken to something of innocence

I just explain my feelings
Cause I don't understand in that type of writings

Sameh
I forgot to say thank you with my first visit .. Actually you gave us a
a soul feed with these topics
Thanx a gain
&
waiting the last line

[سامح]

I'm totally shocked cause I didn't expect it's a poem
I thought it's a picture with secret
Hhh

I can write one like it and will call it poem Why not?


.. no we should say truth
.. when it read for the first time you feel nothing just confused
but when I read it again and again I feel the difference and this red weel refer to some thing scary and the w chicken to something of innocence

I just explain my feelings
Cause I don't understand in that type of writings

Sameh
I forgot to say thank you with my first visit .. Actually you gave us a
a soul feed with these topics
Thanx a gain
&
waiting the last line

لازم سامعة بــ الشعر الحر .... هذا يسموه الشعر الحر ..... وللاسف الشعر الحر انتقل النا بصورة خاطئة انتقل النا فد شي يسموه blank verse و عافوا الــ free verse الحقيقي الي هو الشعر الحر
الي انتهجه محمود البريكان وبدر شاكر السياب من تي اس اليوت

[سامح]

so much depends
upon
a red wheel
barrow
glazed with rain
water
beside the white
chickens
so much depends upon blue sky
cut open by the branches of tree
so much depends upon the transparent G-tube
erupting from the belly of the blue-lipped boy
so much depends on this observer of universe

[J.L]

adorable

[سامح]