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To my friend Unknown

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  1. #1
    ★ملك★
    رآقَيّة آلَمِشّآعر
    تاريخ التسجيل: November-2010
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    مزاجي: Don’t Know
    المهنة: Teacher
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    To Unknown






    How my world will be
    without you
    My light will disappear
    my sadness will back again
    my heart is now in pain
    hard,so hard
    to forget you
    and all i wanna
    is to be with you
    how could you simply
    say
    goodbye
    and what is the reason
    tell me
    why
    come back soon
    and let us fly together
    fly together
    to the moon
    come back and kiss away my tears
    come back and take away my fears
    can you hear my voice
    do not break my
    heart
    do not break it into two part
    I
    missed your presence
    I
    missed your words
    I
    missed your poems
    even i
    missed your
    darkness
    come back soon
    and let us fly
    let us fly
    to the
    moon


    These are my own words
    written by
    Me


  2. #2
    من المشرفين القدامى
    روح لايمسها عابر
    تاريخ التسجيل: October-2011
    الدولة: في طيات النسيان
    الجنس: أنثى
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    مزاجي: هادئة
    المهنة: قطف ثمار الأمل من شجرة الصبر
    أكلتي المفضلة: ثمار الأمل
    آخر نشاط: 2/June/2012
    مقالات المدونة: 101
    very touchable
    my dear Princess you made my tears fall
    thanks for your honest words
    I hope brother Unknown comes back and very soon
    please accept my passing and my evaluation
    wish you the best

  3. #3
    صديق نشيط
    Caius
    تاريخ التسجيل: July-2011
    الدولة: Usa /maimi
    الجنس: ذكر
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    مزاجي: Your always being tested
    المهنة: To be the smartest person I do not like to be in second place
    آخر نشاط: 26/August/2013
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    To Unknown






    How my world will be
    without you
    My light will disappear
    my sadness will back again
    my heart is now in pain
    hard,so hard
    to forget you
    and all i wanna
    is to be with you
    how could you simply
    say
    goodbye
    and what is the reason
    tell me
    why
    come back soon
    and let us fly together
    fly together
    to the moon
    come back and kiss away my tears
    come back and take away my fears
    can you hear my voice
    do not break my
    heart
    do not break it into two part
    I
    missed your presence
    I
    missed your words
    I
    missed your poems
    even i
    missed your
    darkness
    come back soon
    and let us fly
    let us fly
    to the
    moon


    These are my own words
    written by
    Me

    Princess i have to say
    your words is make me feel im home
    and you know well i will always be there for you
    I love to travel but i dont like the sequel of my adventure
    People like me will never stay in one place
    I always loved to fly away
    Do not try to stand between me and the mysterious unknown i seek
    People like me will never have friends only rival
    i seal friendship zone from long time
    it not worth my time
    i only like to touch the darkness In their hearts
    and i like to actived the haterd in their souls
    the only thing i live for is to stand on the edge of unknown
    the power of darkness is taking over me
    Prinsses you dont need someone like me to make you shine
    Princess your the moon in the winter nights

  4. #4
    من المشرفين القدامى
    اميرة الثلج
    تاريخ التسجيل: September-2011
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    مزاجي: الحمد لله
    المهنة: مهندس
    أكلتي المفضلة: المقسوم من الطيبات
    موبايلي: c3
    آخر نشاط: 18/October/2015

  5. #5
    ★ملك★
    رآقَيّة آلَمِشّآعر
    You are welcome my sister

  6. #6
    من أهل الدار
    تاريخ التسجيل: December-2011
    الجنس: ذكر
    المشاركات: 13,566 المواضيع: 1,035
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    مقالات المدونة: 9
    sister princess I want you to accept my analysis
    I can't stand without criticizing your magical poem . From the begining the poetess laments pearson who names " Unknown" . She says to him I can't leave without you , my world will be empty . She asks him how my world will be ? .. may be will be too hard or will be harsh without you , from these lines we can see that the poetess has no hope as if she lost him for along time " he never comes back again. All my bright things will vanish when you leave us , my sadness will back agan, she seems she was sad and because of you she is happy now but when he leaves her sadness will come back again .this is a very harm picture the poetess draws it . It is harmful to leave us now her heart is full of pain , and sorrow . she can't stay without him . hard to delete hime from her memory . Unknown looks he wants to say farewell , but she is pleading to not say goodbye. this is the most blooded word hard to say it. she starts crying .... crying but without benefit.. she said that I miss every thing even the darkness , and this is metaphorical use . eventually she has a glampse of hope she is trying not to be hopeless.. she waits for him to comeback again and I wish to come

    briefly speaking ... the whole poem is magnifecent , touchy
    i will stand to you for this poem
    evaluations

  7. #7
    ★ملك★
    رآقَيّة آلَمِشّآعر
    All what you had said is true,she tries to hold on ,to make hope but
    it was useless i just write this poem as a gift to my friend hehe
    and he like it as you did..many many thanks for this
    analysis
    and i really enjoy it my friend
    my regards 2 you
    thanks alot

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