هنا

[ღالبرنسيسةღ]

Time stops
And stands still
Each day
Seems like a year
I'm lost
And can't be found
In this darkness
I lay dying
Cold
Empty
And alone
It holds me down
And won't let go
There is no escaping
it consumes me
until there's nothing left
I may look fine
But on the inside I'm full of death

[ٱجَمل ٱنٌسًٱنٌة]

well done my dear
keep going

[ღالبرنسيسةღ]

thank you my sis

[سامح]

But on the inside I'm full of death " this is the conclusion of the whole poem , it gives the sense of pain as if the speaker lives depressed life , i will not keep writing , I will say it is simple words , and style I enjoy reading it

[فراشًــــة المِحـــبْة]

I like such topics

[ღالبرنسيسةღ]

But on the inside I'm full of death " this is the conclusion of the whole poem , it gives the sense of pain as if the speaker lives depressed life , i will not keep writing , I will say it is simple words , and style I enjoy reading it

pain is sweet my brother hehe

thank u so much for your passing & comment

[ღالبرنسيسةღ]

I like such topics

my sister you r most welcome

thx