I really, really enjoyed reading your and Zahraa´ words. There were two special things that brought my attention to your work. The first one, when you started writing, your words could tell that you were just yourselves as if you were thinking loud, also, I liked the idea of choosing easy words it made your work look in better shape and you guys used your creativity in putting thoughts in the right place other than spending time and energy in using difficult words that we usually acknowledge one side of their meaning , or at least follow what the dictionary tells us
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The second thing I liked about your work, that you actually ( were ) thinking in English, and I really admired that fact in you guys and its basically the corner stone of your future
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The only thing I would recommend as a friend of yours, If you plan to write the same way in Future, it´s very good to consider the form that you are going to use before writing, then your work would look more professional and would be worth sharing with people whom master this field. If you plan to write a poem, you have to make sure that your stanzas are well rhymed, otherwise you work can be shaped on paragraphs and that would look fascinating.
Amazing work brother, and please bid my greetings to Zahraa´ and looking forward to seeing more of you
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L.o.F
رد مع اقتباس
thax to U & Zahrra
المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة سامح محمد
thanks for bieng here
